हे प्रिये!
तू
समझती है,
मैं, तुझे
भूल गया हूँ!
पर,
चाहे, हूँ
मैं मंदिर में
या फिर,कोई
मस्जिद में,
अधरों पे,
तेरा ही,
नाम मेरे, अब
रहता है!
सोता हूँ
तेरा
नाम लेकर,
जगने पर
तू
याद आती है!
तू
सपना है,
सच्चाई है,
तुझसे
जीवन का
राग मेरे!
मैं तो
अभी भी
तेरा हूँ
पर, तू
हो गयी
परायी है!
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Dedicated to "You" :)
23 comments:
Beautiful and truthful thoughts expressed here.
thanks Amit :)
...nice!
wish "you" reads too and appreciates:)
thanks for your wishes Amit ji :)
Romantic..!
@Ghazala...thanks :)
Lovely....beautifully written..words are nicely arranged...i must say "wow"..
@suman..thanks a lot :)
Kya baat hai!! This could be the lyrics of a song...Very nicely written Guruji!
Kya baat hai!! This could be the lyrics of a song...Very nicely written Guruji!
WOW..WOW....WOW....
very beautiful
"अधरों पे, तेरा ही, नाम मेरे, अब रहता है!"
how romantic... love to read ...
@moni..thanks a lot cutie :)
@indu...good to know that you liked it....thanks for your compliment :)
touche'
touche'
@renu .. :) :)
congratulations. well written
@Atul....thanks a ton :)..but why congratulations ?
hmmmmmm..... you really are a nut case!!! And the most beautiful poems are written by them!! This is one such! Kudos!!
@divya...thanks :) I am happy that you liked it :)
Losing someone you love and still the love is present like always. Lovely poem.
@saru...thanks :) i am glad tht u liked it :)
viyog ras adn atishayokti alankaar!! :D :P
awesome combination...n so is ur poem \m/ :)
@PKP....thanks a lot :)
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